Comments on: Here’s My Beef

By: Dory Vinett

Dory Vinett — Thu, 22 Jul 2010 01:55:29 +0000

Duncan, I think you subconsciously inserted the final “it” in the last statement (I can’t really justify calling it a sentence.) Like requires an object, as it is a transitive verb.

By: Madeleine Robins

Madeleine Robins — Wed, 21 Jul 2010 17:04:13 +0000

And shouldn’t the apostrophe before the “n” face the other way? (Blanking on the correct term.)

By: Ron Dickie

Ron Dickie — Wed, 21 Jul 2010 15:01:10 +0000

Great, now I’m hungry.

By: Princess Alethea

Princess Alethea — Wed, 21 Jul 2010 14:59:30 +0000

Matt & Phillip are right — the ‘n snagged me first.

Diana picked up what bothered me later…that stupid lacking comma after frozen.

But yeah. Kind of horrible all around, right? And people get paid for this??

By: Matt Forbeck

Matt Forbeck — Wed, 21 Jul 2010 14:53:10 +0000

The conjunctive letter between hot and juicy should have an apostrophe on both sides to show the missing letters. Also, there should be a comma after frozen to properly set the appositive.

By: Diana Rowland

Diana Rowland — Wed, 21 Jul 2010 14:52:17 +0000

Needs a comma after frozen. Or set “never frozen” between m-dashes.

By: allaboutduncan

allaboutduncan — Wed, 21 Jul 2010 14:47:31 +0000

Is it the abbreviation of “and” as ‘n?

The journalism grad in me doesn’t like the “Made to order, just the way you like it” – that’s two sentences, put a period in there.